Task 3: The Importance of communication skills for engineers
“Communication skills are an essential component in the education of engineering students to facilitate not just students’ education but also to prepare them for their future career”
-Marc Riemer, Faculty of Engineering, Monash University (2007)
By having communication skills in the education of engineering students, it allows students to clearly articulate their thoughts and ideas, and to understand as well as interpret the ideas of others. Through this, it further prepares for their future careers in the industry. Engineers often must work with clients and colleagues from diverse backgrounds and may need to present technical information to non-technical audiences. They may also need to write up reports and proposal, and to effectively communicate their work through presentations and meetings. Overall, this quote suggests that communication skills are a vital part of the education of engineering students as they can help students to better understand and articulate complex ideas, to work effectively in team settings, and to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences.
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ReplyDeleteBy having communication skills in the education of engineering students, [it allows students to clearly articulate their thoughts and ideas, and to understand as well as interpret the ideas of others]. {Through this, it further prepares for their future careers in the industry.} Engineers often must work with clients and colleagues from diverse backgrounds and may need to present technical information to non-technical audiences. [They may also need to write up reports and proposal, and to effectively communicate their work through presentations and meetings.] Overall, this quote suggests that communication skills are a vital part of the education of engineering students as they can help students to better understand and articulate complex ideas, to work effectively in team settings, and to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences.
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"Through this, it further prepares for their future careers in the industry." Might be too short so adding examples when preparing for their future career, such as scenarios would be good.
Otherwise, the content is good and concise, nothing feels wasted in the statements.
Organisation:
Good organisation, with structure in the statements that is fluid and overall pleasant to read and understand.
Language: (TLDR; some places where you have placed ",and" may not always be required and might not be good with fluidity of the statements)
"and to understand as well as interpret the ideas of others" a better response would be "to understand and interpret the idea of others"
"They may also need to write up reports and proposal, and to effectively communicate their work through presentations and meetings." I believe the sentence could be structure like this "They may also require write up reports and proposals to effectively communicate their work through presentations and meetings."